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Friday, August 21, 2020

Why animals should not be kept in captivity.

Hey bloggers,

What are you doing in the weekend?

This week I am posting a blog on my writing. For writing we are doing a Persuasive Writing about anything we want. I did mine on why animals should not be kept in captivity. Here it is.
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Would you want to be one of these animals?
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 26, 2020 at 1:17 PM

    Hi India, my name is Yousuf from waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you begin with a questions and you were hyped up. Maybe next time you could write what captivity means. This made me remember when I had to write about an animal and that animal was an ant. If you want to check my blog http://wpsyousufs.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html#comment-form here it is blog
    u later.

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  2. UnknownSeptember 3, 2020 at 1:23 PM

    Kia ora India
    I enjoyed reading your edited version of your persuasive writing today in literacy. It was a good idea to combine some of your ideas and formulate paragraphs. You make some great points. How awful for animals that are kept in small, enclosed spaces. Keep up the great work!
    Ms Catton

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  3. Harmony-JadeApril 15, 2021 at 10:03 AM

    Tena koe my name is Harmony and your school is cool I like the way you made it rainbow what do you use ?

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